Here’s a good article from ISA Insider, a site I just discovered that has plenty of great screenwriting content. What are some things that will turn off a potential reader of your work? Writer Lee Jessup talks about passive protagonists, lacking character descriptions, over-written action, dialogue that becomes monologue, and other wrong moves.

Check it out at
https://www.networkisa.org/articles/view/dont-ruin-a-good-read-screenwriting-mistakes-to-avoid