Here’s an article from Scriptmag about writing with subtext in mind. For example to get across a character’s emotional state, instead of saying “He is stunned,” try “The air rushes out of his lungs.” Describe specific actions, then let the reader (and actor) interpret the state of mind.
(Scroll past the first part about teaching to get to the parts about subtext.)
The Script Lab uses lyrics from Team America’s awesome montage song to explain the hows and whys of using montage segments in your screenplays. Check out the article here.
Here’s a good article on scene headings over at ScriptMag.com, and all the ways they can be done right and wrong. Dr. Format explains it well!
In this double episode of The Moment, host Brian Koppelman talks to two acclaimed writers Tony Gilroy and Scott Frank about writing, their careers, and William Goldman.
The Moment with Brian Koppelman
I especially enjoyed hearing Gilroy talk about the “horse” scene from his script for Michael Clayton.
EXT. THE FIELD — DAWN
MICHAEL getting out of the car. Standing there.
THREE HORSES poised at the crest of the pasture. Hanging there in the fog like ghosts.
MICHAEL jumping the fence. Walking slowly into the field. Behind him, the MERCEDES with the engine running.
THE HORSES aware of him now. Watching him come.
MICHAEL’S FACE as he walks. And later on we’ll understand all the forces roiling inside him, but for the moment, the simplest thing to say is that this is a man who needs more than anything to see one pure, natural thing, and by some miracle has found his way to this place. The wet grass and cold air and no coat — none of it makes any difference to him right now — he’s a pilgrim stumbling into the cathedral.
And he stops. Just standing there. Empty. Open. Lost.
Nothing but the field and the fog and the woods beyond.
THE HORSES staring at him.
MICHAEL staring back. And just like that…
THE MERCEDES EXPLODES!
It’s not traditional, but slowing down the flow of the screenplay to focus on Michael’s internal state helped to indicate to the production crew just how important this moment should be when filmed and edited. And it’s a standout scene in the final film.
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Live Q&A to follow each reading!
May 11, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Concrete: The Deep by Jason Terrill
Still Watching by Brian VanDenBergh & Nick Pasquarella
Superbug by Gio Forlenza
What can you learn about screenwriting from Pixar films? A lot.